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Friday, August 5, 2011

what world eats............

Food Nutrition Eating Health Diet <span style='font-weight: bold'></span>
  This is a picture that I picked to write this writing. This is a picture is taken from the Revis family of North Carlonia. I'll give you why I picked this family. And I'll pretend for being one member of this family.
  If I look at this picture, it makes me to think the food that I like, because there are a lot of foods in here. For eample, pizza, meat, milk, cider, grapes etc. So I picked this picture, and have these foods. And I think these foods will be very delicious too.
  Now,I will be a member of this family. Today is my birthday. I came from school, and there was my father, who must be at the work. And we played with him, and my brother. And I heard the phone call from my mother that she finished her cooking, so come. When I went there... Wow!!! Pizza, steak, grapes, which are I like... I like my mother, and we sang the song for me. It was such a great day.. I enjoyed this day,and I hope it happens everyday.
August 24 2011 (pretending)
  I woke up, and I was quite surprising! My father was making food, so I was going to help him. I said Ill make tomato juice. So I got cider, and tomato.. When I taste. It was great. And he started to make a hamburger, so I got the meat from the refrigiator, and I helped him to slice them, so we can put them in the bread. And then my mother came out. Then she tasted this hotdog, and tomato juice she said it tastes good! I am happy, because she said it's tasty.
This is the end of my writing.
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1 comment:

  1. Interesting and both enjoyable essay writing~ It was fung that you wrote in the point of view of the character lol. Good :)

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