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Wednesday, August 3, 2011

compare, and contrast.

Today I'll compare and contrast two camps which are Camp Big Apple, and Ranch West Camp. I'll tell you short explamnation about them. First, camp Big Apple is preparing us for important English Language tests like SAT which are very important, all classes are taught by professors who have at least Master Degree from an American university, and it as a dormitory, and there are lots of students from every side of world. So we can know their cultures. Second, Ranch west camp is placed in rural area which is very pure. We can pick subject that we want to study about. So we have free. And they do lots of things at outside.
NowI'll compare and contrast these two camps. Both camps go abroad. But on the other hand, Camp Big Apple has a dormitory where we sleep. And Ranch west is home staying program. and they are both by graduated students. But Camp Big Apple is  all classes are taught by professors who have at least Master Degree from an American university, and Ranch west's teachers are recent teachers.
Thank you!!!!!!!

2 comments:

  1. So what camp do you prefer?? :P Good explanation and comparision. Maybe if you had put about the Head Start Splash, it have been more detailed, but good explanation among those two camps!! :)

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  2. OK, but you need to give more information about your choice. Also, try to develop the transitions better. You said:
    "Both camps go abroad. But on the other hand, Camp Big Apple has a dormitory where we sleep."
    Are you contrasting going abroad with a dormitory? Why?

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